Wow, that was marvelous! Your writing style is so well suited to these two. :) There were lots of great, really vivid mental images conveyed here; nice work!
And: and here, just as in every other aspect of their lives, they are at odds with one another, both of them pursuing the same goal but unwilling to surrender any ground to the other.
You just summed up the entire manga in one sentence. ^__^
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Date: 2005-03-24 11:30 am (UTC)And: and here, just as in every other aspect of their lives, they are at odds with one another, both of them pursuing the same goal but unwilling to surrender any ground to the other.
You just summed up the entire manga in one sentence. ^__^