Open season's been declared on PWPs, judging from recent posts in various fandom related communities. Personally, I don't care whether fanfic contains sex or not if it's entertaining and well written. But when people start making judgments about the 'morality' of certain types of writing, well...what better way than to counter with porn? Lots of it.

So here we go, starting with some Harry Potter porn because why not? I had some The Liar and the Auror outtakes languishing on my HD. This bit is for [livejournal.com profile] bloody_american who will eventually get an actual story, but deserves teh hawt sexXxors lol for being made to wait so long. Thanks go to [livejournal.com profile] metal_dog5 and [livejournal.com profile] fragilistikal, who both took a look before I posted it.

Insert a clever title for this Harry Potter Porn [here].




Even he had had doubts the first time, and he was the one who'd suggested that they try it in the first place. Still, there's a huge gulf between fantasising about being buggered and actually having it done to you. That he might let Snape do this to him hadn't even occurred to him for quite some time.

He'd even wondered if Snape was right. He'd never fancied men, after all. Perhaps it was possible to spend the better part of a year sleeping next to Snape, kissing Snape, but not actually fancying Snape in the strictest sense of the word. He didn't think there was anything normal about that, but he was also far past believing that his life conformed to any standard of normality.

After a trail of failed attempts at considering the possibility in the shower, on the nights when Snape slept in his own bedroom, or during the afternoons when Snape was puttering about in the garage or in the garden, when he'd finally convinced himself that he had been wrong, that was when the thought had slipped in like a thief in the night - Snape on top of him, and suddenly he'd realised, ah, yes. That's what I want, isn't it?

Still, there is a huge gulf between fantasising and doing, and he'd had his doubts. But he loves it, loves it, loves it now. Loves it. Loves everything about it. Loves the way Snape's face looks looming over him, flushed scarlet, the colour not at all becoming on his normally sallow complexion. Loves the sweat that mats Snape's greasy hair to his temples and rolls off the tip of his giant nose, the way it glistens on the hair around his nipples.

Snape doesn't have what anyone would describe as flawless skin, and it just gets uglier when he's fucking: huge red blots of flush creeping up across his body. Harry runs his hands down Snape's sweat-slicked back and Snape moans and twists beneath his touch. Harry's legs are wrapped around Snape's waist. His thighs ache from being stretched around Snape's body, and he loves that feeling too.

Snape's cock is inside him, rubbing, sliding, thrusting, colliding, and it feels so good. Snape is panting; his breath pours over Harry's face in hot gusts, and Harry arches towards it and moans.

Snape moans too, voice rasped raw with usage and lust. Harry likes him best like this, when he's so far gone he doesn't care how he looks or sounds, when all he cares about is the feel of Harry beneath him, Harry around him. Harry's intoxicated by the intimacy of it - this, this is sneering, caustic Snape, and all he wants is to get further inside of Harry.

Snape is far from an experienced lover and possesses nothing in the way of finesse and little by way of variation. But Harry loves even this - the unbridled, raw enthusiasm with which Snape approaches the act. Snape pounds into and out of him with a fury that Harry was never able to summon for any of his lovers, and he arches into and writhes away from Snape in ecstasies of sensation.

The sound of their bodies colliding blends with the creaking bedsprings, their harsh panting, the moans and gasps escaping unchecked from their mouths. Snape is riding Harry hard now, Harry feels each thrust piercing into him, and it's too much. He throws his head back and comes.

Snape's thrusting slows as he watches Harry through glittering, slitted eyes.

"Ah, god," Harry murmurs. "Ah..."

He reaches up and caresses Snape's arms, his chest, his back, his shoulders as Snape begins to move inside him once more. Snape is driving into him, face contorted, lips pulled back over yellowed, crooked teeth.

"Snape..." He whispers the name, caresses, and whispers again.

And then it's Snape's turn, and he climaxes in a shuddering, spasming heap atop of Harry.

They lie still for some moments, entwined in one another's bodies until Snape grows too heavy and Harry rolls him off with a slight grunt. Snape makes his own brief grunt of protest, then raises himself on one elbow to get the rag from the bedside table. Harry is content to lie silently while Snape ministers to him, tenderly sponging his body off.

Once he's cleaned Harry to his satisfaction, Snape lowers himself gently back onto the bed, and Harry folds him into his arms.

Snape doesn't possess any finesse after the act either, so it comes as no surprise to Harry when Snape's breathing slows into the deep, even respiration of sleep. He rests his forehead against Snape's shoulder and inhales the scent of Snape's sweaty hair, and it isn't long before he's ready to sleep himself.

"Assure me, Potter, that you are still among the living."

He doesn't quite jump, but Snape seems to sense his surprise anyway.

"No fair," he says. "You always fall asleep the moment you've finished."

"To face plenty of 'old man' comments in the morning, however 'well intentioned' they may be."

It's true; Harry can't argue with him there.

"Just thinking, anyway," he says, and yawns hugely.

"Mmm. About?"

"You really want to know?"

"Would I have wasted my time asking, otherwise?"

Harry wraps himself more securely around Snape, the wiry hairs of Snape's chest itching against the skin of his arms. "About how everyone thought you were an ugly git at Hogwarts, and here I am, in bed with you."

"Is that so," Snape says dryly, although Harry can tell that he's laughing along with him. "My, how things have changed."

"Not really. You're still an ugly git, after all," Harry tells him with a straight face.

Snape rolls suddenly to face Harry, the post-coital variation on his habitual theatric whirl. "You will pay dearly for that remark, Potter," he says. "Tomorrow, after I wake up."

Harry laughs and rests his head against Snape's chest, where he can feel the silent rumble of Snape's laughter against his cheek.

finis


これで以上です。

From: [identity profile] switchknife.livejournal.com


Join [livejournal.com profile] pornish_pixies. Please. Nownownownow.

*pants*

Snape's ugliness! I love, love, LOVE how you don't glaze over it. You understand how, at times, a lover's very imperfections are what makes him perfect.

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Thanks! Glad you liked it. (Any anyway, Snape's ugliness is what makes him sexy IMO!)

From: [identity profile] lherelenfeline.livejournal.com


My but this is exquisite! The utter humanity of Snape, and the way his falts are 'him', and their happy dysfunction and the rejection of normalcy... I am goop at your feet.

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Yay! I'm always happy to turn people into goop. Thanks for reading.

From: [identity profile] ex-saepe968.livejournal.com


*whimpers*

I can only second Switchknife. And please, more outtakes from The Liar and the Auror? Gah!

Loves the sweat that mats Snape's greasy hair to his temples and rolls off the tip of his giant nose, the way it glistens on the hair around his nipples.

*off to rec*

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Thanks for reading:-) There are outtakes, but I'm going to work on the actual next story before I put any more of them out, I think. Don't hold onto your hat or anything, though. And thanks for the rec!
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From: [identity profile] bloody-american.livejournal.com

Queens of the L33T!!


Eee!! I.. I just... I.. I don't know what to say! Except for thank you!!! *GLOMPS* & That was fantastic! No. That was beyond fantastic, it so roxXx0rz, h4rd(0r4 babe!!

Snape doesn't have what anyone would describe as flawless skin, and it just gets uglier when he's fucking: huge red blots of flush creeping up across his body.

I love the realism. A lot of writers like to pretend that Snape's pretty but really, he's not. That's why the relationship is so much better, it truly isn't based on looks. Plus, the fact that you wrote a sentence about Snape "fucking" just makes me giggle. I guess there's a part of me that still (regardless of the countless numbers of porny Snape stories I've read) sees him as that "greasy git" that nobody likes. I don't know, it's just the little seemingly insignificant things that I find amusing. Heh. :D

Talk about unexpected porn, hehe. Dude, I'd wait forever and a day if I had to because I know whatever you give me will be worth it.

<3

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com

Re: Queens of the L33T!!


w00t! 1 4m s0 gl4d j0 lik3d it, d4wg. My brain hurts, now. Just so you know.

Anyway, thanks & glad you liked:-) Snape isn't pretty. Sirius is pretty. Guess which character I like and why. And I'll give you whatever you want, bebe. Heh heh.

From: [identity profile] everythingisaid.livejournal.com


I stumpled upon this link from a friend of a friend's journal, and I'm so glad I did. I loved "The Liar and the Auror." Mmm, and this piece was a delicious little outtake. : )

From: [identity profile] metal-dog5.livejournal.com


Each time I read this, I love it more and more... I really like this final version. You added some great stuff :)

From: [identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com


I agree - it gets better at each sitting. And there's possibly more to come? *guh* Any chance of them going back to the Wizarding World (not that I mind them living as Muggles. I think it's brilliant :-)

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From: [identity profile] gaycrow.livejournal.com


Came here via a rec [livejournal.com profile] saepe made in [livejournal.com profile] fic_fairy.

I really loved this out-take. I've just finished reading "The Liar and the Auror" (which I can't believe I've not seen before now), and loved that too. This was the icing on the cake. Lovely chocolatey icing. I'm going back to read it again. :)

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Ooh, wonderful. I'm glad you liked both. This ficlet was designed to be like icing - no nutritional value, but enticing anyway.

And also: Icon love!

From: [identity profile] loupgarou1750.livejournal.com


oh man! Real Snape. Snape as he is. This made me almost happier than I can stand.

Loves the way Snape's face looks looming over him, flushed scarlet, the colour not at all becoming on his normally sallow complexion. Loves the sweat that mats Snape's greasy hair to his temples and rolls off the tip of his giant nose, the way it glistens on the hair around his nipples.

Perfect. Just perfect.

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Real Snape, huh? That's a real compliment as well, so thank you:)

From: [identity profile] melpemone.livejournal.com


Here via [livejournal.com profile] ntamara's rec, and I have to say, that was both magnificently hot and precisely what I needed. Thank you!

From: [identity profile] pitchblackrose.livejournal.com


*points at [livejournal.com profile] melpemone's comment*

What she said.

And now I want Snapesex! Unfair that stupid Potter gets it all.

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Hee! But Potter doesn't think so;-) Thanks for reading.

From: [identity profile] maelwaedd.livejournal.com


Oh my. Recced by [livejournal.com profile] ntamara, btw. This story is fantastic. I love your descriptions, and the act itself is just amazing. Excellent language, and hot-but-not sex, if I can say that and you can take it as a compliment.

Rock. :)

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


I can take it as a compliment, because that's what I was going for. I figured that if someone like Harry (who certainly knows what he wants) was going to have sex with Snape, he was going to do it because he wants Snape - so I'm glad that came through in the writing.

From: [identity profile] dphearson.livejournal.com


(here via [livejournal.com profile] ntamara)

Yes. Yes. Yes. PErfect- Snape's 'uglymess' and roughness is transmuted iinto something raw and very sexy. And Harry, feeling that this is no barrier to the act itself.

Well done!

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


On the contrary, Harry as I see him would only have sex with Snape because he wants Snape for who he is. Glad you enjoyed it:)

From: [identity profile] amorettea.livejournal.com


If I start a story in which Snape turns out to be using a "glamour" or really has soft silky hair or gets his teeth fixed--I even started a horror in which Harry catches him in jeans (gag) with his contacts out and Snape has blue eyes!!!!! I nearly scratched my eyes out to avoid any more of that--I stop reading immediately because the story isn't about "my" Snape but some other character with a similiar name.

THIS is Snarry! All the faults. The ugly lover who isn't all that great in bed but you still love more than life itself. True, erotic and with a hint of humor. Excellent!

Amorette

From: [identity profile] miriam-heddy.livejournal.com


Just wanted to second this, because yeah, that's exactly what makes this kick-ass. I love the lack of air-brushing here, and the celebrated messiness of it all. I think my only moment of doubt came with the bit about the "ministrations" in cleansing Harry. Seems a bit unlikely, and a bit fanfic. I suspect that Harry'd be lucky if Snape didn't fall asleep leaving Harry in wetspot. But I'm willing to overlook that bit of girly cliche, just for the rest of the wonderfulness here!

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Here via [livejournal.com profile] ntamara.
What a wonderful story. Ugly!Snape is the best.

From: [identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com


Snape is far from an experienced lover and possesses nothing in the way of finesse and little by way of variation. But Harry loves even this - the unbridled, raw enthusiasm with which Snape approaches the act.

Love that!
Sexyugly!Snape and knowswhathewants!Harry. Lovely combo! ;)
~J~

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Thank you:) I think Harry is the epitome of the bottom who knows what he wants and pursues it. Anyway, glad you enjoyed!

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From: [identity profile] severusslave.livejournal.com


Snape rolls suddenly to face Harry, the post-coital variation on his habitual theatric whirl.

That little sentence made my day.
He's such a drama queen, isn't he?!

T'was a very nice smutty story. I really liked that you seperated the story from the smut, cause, in my opinion, if the main story ended with one big pwpscene, it would have dragged it down.
Several notches!
.... So Great work!

Severusslave

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Thank you! I really, really, resisted writing smut in that story, but I wanted to soooo badly. (And thanks to that, I've got a lot of unused smut scenes on my HD. This was one of them.) Glad you enjoyed it!

From: [identity profile] orionnoire.livejournal.com


(Hi, here thanks to a rec by [Unknown site tag] on [livejournal.com profile] snape_potter)

I just finished reading The Liar and the Auror and all I can say is wow! It's a fantastically written story with a touching, yet realistic ending and the PWP goes so perfectly with it. The unperfect sex is remarkable and so humbling. It's realistic but you still make it appealing to the reader, which is something very rare! Are you planning on writing more of this?

I friended you, btw.

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Hello! Thanks for dropping in and commenting! I'm glad you liked the fic so much, and that you took the time to read one that's so old. I am actually working on a continuation (of sorts), but RL has been keeping me busy lately, so I don't have as much time for writing long fics. But it's still in the works.

And thanks for friending;)

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Here from [livejournal.com profile] ayla_recs

I don't know how I missed this! *looks around bewildered* I very much enjoyed The Liar and the Auror and hope I sent you feedback to tell you so, and this is absolutely icing on the cake.

It's lovely smut, very real, and I love the switch in POV from the main story. Love that Harry revels in Snape, hungry for the intimacy and need of him.

Thank you so much!
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From: [personal profile] ansku


I'm glad it worked out for them :) So realistic and sweet in a 'real world' kind of way, not 'everything is sunshine and butterflies' variety...

From: [identity profile] lebateleur.livejournal.com


Thank you! Being the author, I knew from the beginning that they'd end up together, but getting it believably down onto paper is another thing entirely.
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