lirazel: Jane and Rochester outside from the 2006 version of Jane Eyre ([tv] a similar string)
lirazel ([personal profile] lirazel) wrote in [personal profile] lebateleur 2025-04-03 03:10 pm (UTC)

Holy heck you've been busy!

What a shame about that ending.

She’ll state a fact or observation once, in plain language, and that’s it. There’s almost no bloat here, and it’s refreshing and lovely.

Oh my gosh, why does no one write this way anymore? The endless repetition these days drives me insane!

I've never read the Gibson but your criticisms seem really fair and insightful.

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