I absolutely /love/ this fic! The best I've read in such a long time! ^_^ I do have a suggestion though. I find that it moves aheead much too quickly, specifcally refering to the spots where they begin kissing and when L enters Raito. I had to read through those parts a few time before I could grasp what just happened. XD I hope you understand what I mean. ^^

But I still worship this fic. *__*